Saturday, 12 February 2011

Original individual idea


Macaria Haner was the girl about school, the ever popular gorgeous girl who boys dreamed of and girls dreamed of publicly humiliating. She cared for no-one and throughout her life has left a path of destruction for her younger sister to clear up. Kadisha Haner was almost polar opposite, she was basically unseen at school, she kept her grades up and tried her hardest to be the perfect child her parents dreamed off. She’d sit up at night as her sister told her her latest scandal or plan of debauchery and called her Kadi.
Maci was prone to disappearing for days on end so when it happened Kadi would make up some plausible story for her parents that she was at a friends, or away on camp and they’d forgotten the date. But when Maci goes into her sisters neat tidy room for a late night gossip she is shocked to find her bed empty. Her parent we’re on vacation and Maci assues her smart sister will be ok.
However, 3 nights later when Maci tried again to find her sister the bed coveres were untouched, the room still pristine with a slight layer of dust forming. She knew something was wrong. Upon searching her room she found tell tails of her younger sisters life. Concerning things, things Kadi would never possess. Here begins a story of Kadi’s secret life and of how Maci really didn’t know her younger sister at all.
Hidden in boxes or draws or under her bed she find’s letters, two different handwriting, illegible to her the letters are jumbled, clearly it was understood by her sister. Only one line at the bottom was in English and not in her sister’s neat cursive writing, ‘I’ll kill it and you.’ This note wasn’t in the box but thrown close to it. Paintings stacked up neatly in her, books on black arts, crime, weapons, law, maps with various circled loactions. A box of news paper clipping’s all with no evident connection but bits and pieces highlighted such as names and crimes. Under a squeaky floorboard a photo album of people she didn’t recognise in each picture was her sister, looking almost completely different and regularly one sadistic looking male with Maci.
After days off searching and asking people she’d seen her sister talking with her parents had caught on the police were coming to look for clues, Maci had cleared the room of anything weird she’d found and hidden them in her room. She’d been holding onto the hope her sister would return but nothing was missing, wherever she went she didn’t plan it. Almost at the point of giving up she laid on her sisters bed hands slipping under the pillow and hitting something, upon throwing the pillow she see’s two things, paternity test results and a gun, the results having the same name highlighted in the news clippings about a convict. Her mind flickered back to the note and she slowly sinks into the realisation she doesn’t know her sister at all.
The hunt for her sister begins battling criminals, gangsters, drug dealers all while trying to keep as much from the press and look normal and concerned to the world. 

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